You Got Me Under Your Skin

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    You Got Me Under Your Skin

    No matter what you got me under your skin. No matter what you, have not gotten over me. You are like a magnet, you won't let go, maybe somewhere along the journey you have wanted to let go but again, you will not just walk away and say enough is enough. Interfering in my life is no Good, it let me know just how unhappy you truly are. Wanting me not to find happiness is very selfish on your part.

    Why was it so easy for me to walk away. Maybe I did not care as you did, or maybe I knew when to leave well enough along.

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    BigDaddyCash commented on You Got Me Under Your Skin

    11-22-2009

    What you have written could very well be the chorus of a great song, think about it? Write a tear jerking verse and put this at the beginning and repeat it at the end. I think the title is great and the words you have here bring tears to my eyes. LOL, BDC.
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    Bev750

    11/22/2009

    Cash, Thank for the comments. I am toying with the idea of putting my words into a book.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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