World Peace Is Dead

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    I wrote this poem inspired originally by all the bad things going on in America, bombings and what not. I wrote it quickly and sloppily at first because I was so inspired but I wanted to make it catchy, to rhyme. After editing this is how it turned out. I hope you guys enjoy

    World Peace Is Dead
    World peace is dead
    no matter how hard we try
    We will never fully understand
    the differences of the other side

    We are hypocrites you see
    undeniably so
    we speak for peace over the sea
    but cant get it in our home

    There are bangs and booms
    and differences of religion
    we know different ways of life
    and always meet with collision

    But if you stop and think
    you may start to believe
    world war is a wise man
    who makes us believe

    and i happen to know
    that only a mad men
    would resurrect a wise man
    in an hour of need

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    tmcdermott commented on World Peace Is Dead

    04-19-2013

    heartfelt, timely, truthful and sad. from the gut so obviously. i would hope that you continue to refine in the days to come, while retaining its core, as it certainly has great promise. compelling as it is.
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    kellyt1998

    04/20/2013

    Thank you so much. I actually edited it some and i can't wait to add them, with everything going on in the world I just had to write this.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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