WORDS LIKE SWORDS

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    WORDS LIKE SWORDS
    Oh God!Fade away
    Those days from my life
    The words said and thought;
    Gleaming in sincerity,
    With love and care.
    To my life,
    You are the light house.
    To my death,
    You are a sword.
    Took me to the depth of sea,
    Showed me the pebbles...
    Alas!!!
    Put a mount on my head,
    Crushed my heart,
    Squeezed my feelings,
    Drank the sap....
    That's what I deserve
    Worth to be dejected,
    Created to be deserted.
    Killed for no reason.
    My soul in thirst of revenge,
    Moves like a withered leaf,
    In the twilight of life.......

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    DeepEclipse commented on WORDS LIKE SWORDS

    07-14-2009

    Emotional explosion. It is like you are honorably accepting dishonor. Interesting......
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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