Wish It Were Me...

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    Wish It Were Me...

    Wish it were me instead of you,
    Cause I can't imagine you leaving this earth
    with a lifetime not through.

    Your the heart of this family; always have been,
    still can't believe it all cming to an end.

    There's not a lot we can do, so I've been told.
    But we can comfort and pray for a few more days with you.

    Still I can't imagine what's going through your mind; wish
    it were as easy as saying your going to be fine...

    I know we all need to be strong in your time of need,
    but it's hard seeing someone leave.

    All the more reason I wish it were me, cause it's just not your time
    it can't be...

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    acurtis5 commented on Wish It Were Me...

    09-27-2009

    I too lost someone way too soon and when she died our faimily fell apart so I love the way you put those feelings into perspective great job!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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