Wish i hadn't said goodbye

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this is a terrible poem, but i haven't written since i broke up with my boyfriend. He's the one this is about, the one this is for.

Wish i hadn't said goodbye

I was hoping
this could end soon
that we would go back
and we could be more loving

but our break really happened
this time
you moved on
more quickly then expected

now I'm left in your dust
left gossiping with your new girl
she talks about you
reminds me of us

it was my decision
to end it here
a year of on and off
it doesn't feel like its time for our division

i miss those days
when we would just sit back
tell each other our love
but now thats just a haze

so what do i do
i feel so broken
nows he standing right in front of me
he's what I've always dreamed about
so why am i choking?

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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