Will You Ever Return

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    Will You Ever Return

                                      Will You Ever Return

                            I have just seen you go down the lane.
                            The gate is closed and you left un-noticed.
                            When you left without finding me home
                            With much regret I long for your return.
                            But will you ever return?

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    summerbird commented on Will You Ever Return

    01-20-2010

    Thank you so much for the read and comment.
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    stellar commented on Will You Ever Return

    01-18-2010

    You captured the atmosphere of that kind of anxiety...worrying over love ones...and further strengthened by that picture...great write...:)
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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