Wilderness

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    Dedicated to those who are growing up without a father.

    Wilderness

    The wilderness calls upon the animal and the animal listens and wonders.
    The mind is clear yet young in age and wisdom.
    What is the fate of ones choices?
    What is it about making choices, according to what one feels is good or right? Truth is we never no when we're absolutely wrong?
    Mercy and forgiveness falls upon the animal for bad choices and sin.
    The animal asks for complete love enforced by a pure state of mind, heart, and soul.
    The body is there yet it is nothing for it vanishes through time.
    God save the animal for it loves a father that it never had.

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    Johnny5 commented on Wilderness

    01-22-2009

    deep

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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