who to be

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    who to be
    I am not who I want to be

    I do not feel like me



    I‘ve been molded by society

    and the rules are controlling me

    I’ve not been who I want to be

    I wish I knew what I want for me



    I want more determination

    but I wonder if within the duration

    of the rest of the time I have left

    will I be me or will death take my life by theft



    I may change my life one day

    and maybe then I will know what to say

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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