whirlwind

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  • Lost Love

    whirlwind

    you and i have defied time
    we have defied centuries of prejudice
    nothing could stop the whirlwirld
    that brought you and i together
    it was as though destiny
    spoke through time
    and i found you and i loved you
    i knew it would be hard
    that i would have to fight 
    but i chose the side of love
    not acceptance
    but taday those who fought against love
    have won
    and my heart bleeds 
    for this love that was mine, now gone
    for to choose you 
    i would have to forfeit my own blood
    can we really win this war
    this battle against years of hatred
    decades of animosity
    will we be the voice of reason
    will we blur the lines of race, tribalism, social class
    can we be strong enough?
    you and i chose to defy time
    to defy centuries of prejudice
    but maybe our whirlwind is not strong enough
    to keep us together 

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    Hampton commented on whirlwind

    07-12-2009

    I like this work from the standpoint of its message constructed in simple words and phrases that bring the poem to life. Nice work.

    kore

    07/14/2009

    thanks hamptom glad u lyk it

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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