WHEN YOU SMILE

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    WHEN YOU SMILE

    When you smile I can see
    That there are still feelings left with in me
    For years I lived denying a feeling
    And refusing any sense of healing
    At times I found myself longing for a simple touch
    But soon the last hurt comes in so much
    As now I gaze upon a delicate face
    I ponder ways to achieve your grace
    I would love to touch your hand
    And pull you close, oh how grand
    To feel your lips against mine in a kiss
    I wonder if this could cause me great bliss
    When you smile I can see
    There is still a feeling within me.

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    graceladymn commented on WHEN YOU SMILE

    08-25-2009

    Smiles are wonderful invitations. Nice to see that her smile still brings up such good within you. This piece is simple yet revealing.

    Metaldoll commented on WHEN YOU SMILE

    02-03-2009

    I feel every word of this poem. Beautiful.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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