When You Left

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness

    When You Left

     when you left
    i lost a huge part of me
    and i knew
    nothin would never be the same
    i was dreading the day
    that we would part
    all i needed
    was one more day with you
    ever since you walked away
    you ripped my heart into shreds
    but i will never forget
    the time we had as friends

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    Artie commented on When You Left

    10-18-2009

    I've felt this before, and I don't need to tell you, it sucks! Keep moving forward, and keep writing - nice piece
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