when in doubt

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    when in doubt

    lets talk about suicide

    the quickest way to say goodbye

    i found my way to find release

    take the jump and savor the peace

     

    my time is up and im ready to die

    strap a chord around my neck and commit a suicide

    why live a life of lies

    shit so bad it can make you cry

    fuck this place my world is over

    i cant live on this earth staying sober

    i cant bear this life anymore

    a life to fake to fuckin adore

     

    my life in a bubble

    aint nothin but trouble

    find the quick way out

    suicide is best when in doubt!

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    1990lh commented on when in doubt

    10-29-2009

    these sre very strong and deep words, u should read my poem behind my fake smile. i really can relate,as i think most people can. most of the time this world seems void of purpose to me, what is the point why live life off misery, lies, and hopeless dreams. you try and listen when ppl tell you everythin will get better, but how do they know? they dont they jusst say it to say it. if only suicide was so simple, if only.
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    DANi89Rose commented on when in doubt

    08-05-2009

    Suicide is the quickest way out. I believe its both a cowardly move but it also shows a bit of strength n determination, bcus many couldnt commit something like this. But y take the easy way out of life when if u jus stick in there n endure it shows even more strength, n when u r able to put up with the crap u only get stronger.
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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