When I See You!

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    When I See You!
    When I see you,
    Everything goes blank.
    I don't know how it happens
    but it does.
    My mind, the Earth
    Everything is gone
    except you.

    When I look into your eyes,
    theres a sparkle.
    A sparkle like I've never seen before.
    I can't explain it,
    but I like it.

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    hdmac commented on When I See You!

    06-25-2009

    Short and accurate. It is good to see teens expressing themselves on this site so well. It's as if you are looking into the face of God.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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