When I close my eyes... I see

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    When I close my eyes... I see

    When I close my eyes… I see us living

    In a lovely cottage in front of a lake

    Where the trees are perfect

    And the views breathtaking

    And nature speaks when the winds play

     

    When I close my eyes… I feel the scent

    A mixture of pine in the distant woods

    And rejoice the pleasure of the solely leisure

    Where my poems fly in the air of nature

    With a flash of sweet bliss of gratitude

     

    When I close my eyes… I see us running

    Through amazing forests in the early morn

    And I feel the sun rising calm and peaceful

    A perfume of wild flowers dancing blissful

    Guiding our path all the way long

     

    When I close my eyes… my dreams  comes real

    When we share together our joys and sorrows

    In a lovely cottage in front of a lake

    Where we smile forever amused as we never

    With roses and lilacs whispering in the air

     

     

     

     

     

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    SavVySam commented on When I close my eyes... I see

    08-16-2010

    This sounds lovely and very dream worthy...nicely written piece my friend!;)

    stefy commented on When I close my eyes... I see

    06-11-2010

    Such wonderful daydreaming...............................

    Secretdreams commented on When I close my eyes... I see

    04-26-2010

    Thank you... for being always kind with your comments

    Rhymer commented on When I close my eyes... I see

    04-26-2010

    TY for letting me share in your dreams and providing such a picturesque writing to enjoy.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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