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    what

     what am i going to do
    what is his name to me
    what can i do about him
    he is the love of mi life
    he took me though a lot
    he even broke mi hart
    i miss him nd he doesnt
    even want me any more
    but all i know
    is if he wants me back
    i will let him have me
    what am i going to do :(

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    jec commented on what

    02-10-2011

    your words took me into your life ... very well expressed ... the last two lines express such confusion or is it hopelessness ... keep writing this is so well done ... jc
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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