What You'd See

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What You'd See

When you look at me you see a girl full of life and spirit
You see happiness in my eyes
You see a smile on my face
You see someone who enjoys every minute

But if you could look beyond the surface

You'd see a broken heart still bleeding
You'd see the sorrow in my eyes
You'd see a thosand tears I've cried
You'd see the hurt and the pain that I've kept hidden
You'd see the scars that lies left
You'd see open woundsof lonliness
You'd see the feelings of worthlessness and abondonment
You'd see the part of me that wants to run away and hide
You'd see the part of that wants to lie dow and give up
You'd see the part of me still bitter

But if you want to take a chance on me,I'm willing to give it my all
I'm willing to give you my heart

And you'll see
All the love I have to give
The life I want to live
The happiness I want to share

And you'll also see the part of me that fell in love with you

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redbloodink commented on What You'd See

06-14-2010

this was a great write.... don't give up live and write on........ red

roses16

06/14/2010

thanks

redbloodink

06/14/2010

yw.......

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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