Waterless Rain

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  • Tragic State Of A Collect

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    war and peace, loss so much loss

    Waterless Rain

     He steps through a sheer shimmering curtain
    Aspace void of life
    A stage is set for tragedy
    Dark yet luminous
    Emotions spent before all that is
    All that was
    Ill to compromise
    These our ever changing times
    A clock somewhere ticks
    A cathedral bell chimes
    Then an explosion
    Doves and tears colide
    All that one asks
    Is why

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    Gramma2 commented on Waterless Rain

    10-25-2009

    Your poem evoked potent imagery. I did not understand why you misspelled sheer and shimmering. Typo?
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    jayceemay

    10/25/2009

    typo and thanks for the comment

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