Waiting on Tomorrow

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    Waiting on Tomorrow

    WAITING ON TOMORROW:

    Frozen in the rain,
    Waiting on tomorrow,
    Washing my sins away with her memory,
    Soaking my skin; leaving it brittle to the touch,

    Frozen in the rain,
    Tomorrow passes to tomorrow,
    Unable to move,
    Reeling of pain from skin to bone,
    Waiting on tomorrow; but tomorrow never comes.


    By: Richard C. Hobbs

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    bloomingsun commented on Waiting on Tomorrow

    11-15-2009

    Hi. I read all your work and find your style to be really appealling. I like the simplicity of it and the meaningful imagery. Nice work. This one is my fave.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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