Voices
In her naivete,
She felt blind.
It was surreal,
and in her mind
The madness cried
This is a dream.
Her heart became numb,
Her soul became black.
And when she
walked into the dark,
She never came back.
Voices
2 Comments
Tags: Loss
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Tempestlady commented on Voices
02-28-2013
- Simple concise and to the point. Very nice indeed. Write on.....................Tempestlady
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02-22-2013
- I love your style ! I like how you choose words that work together throughout the poem to form a cohesive flow in all that you write. Bravo, mate.
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