Violence

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    Violence

     I say stop the violence.
    Peace and quiet a momment a silence.
    Death everywhere I go.
    Life's a chalange.
    Every scar I received.
    Will alway's be the same even if I went to planet Mars
    Paradise is soon a be.
    So why let it bugg me.
    When I have my whole Life ahead a me.
    But understand that a urban community.
    Is the reason why we can't live in unity.
    God gave me the oppurtunity.
    To allowed me to see.
    So I do.
    The world is my home.
    Where i will alway's be.

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    Chigger2069 commented on Violence

    12-06-2010

    Great write and very true we all have a chance to use are voices and writting to help stop the the violence.
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    Sx9 commented on Violence

    11-06-2010

    yes yes we all share the world,and all its trimmings,but mine is a different thing to hold tight,and control into moles of peace ful thinking souls,violence will be we just which it never was,,cool piece,,
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    And195

    11/09/2010

    thanx

    koolmom0 commented on Violence

    11-06-2010

    This is awesome, a very well written piece. I look forward to reading more from you. :)) Kool
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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