VALENTINE

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    VALENTINE

                                        One simple wish on this
                                              day of love
                                         From each our hearts
                                          flies a turtle dove
                                         A dinner we'll share
                                            at our favorite spot
                                         The dress you'll wear
                                              is oh so hot
                                          Chocolates and Diamonds
                                            as you open the box
                                          Happy Valentines Day
                                           Your Love Rocks

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    SuperChick76 commented on VALENTINE

    02-15-2010

    Aww, what a cute poem. I like the whole "your love rocks" like, that's awesome! A missing comma or two is all the err I saw there, and everybody misses a comma or two(yes, even I occassionally miss a comma, but not two! Ha! jk) Anyways, seriously though, a very nicely written poem. Good job, I loved it. :)
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    Teardrops commented on VALENTINE

    02-15-2010

    your love must love the poem is not then find a new love great poem Marie
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    am2anangel commented on VALENTINE

    02-15-2010

    lol another short but sweet one. right to the point. I liked it again. well done.-tonya
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    Rygar commented on VALENTINE

    02-15-2010

    very sweet declaration of love from one heart to another.
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    koolmom0 commented on VALENTINE

    02-15-2010

    Awesome, short, sweet, romantic, and to the point. :) Kool
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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