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Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

There is so much complexity
in this world inwhich we live
jobs have loss their security
as a result, earning a college degree has loss its thrill

marriage is no longer considered
an honorable and sacred vow
but this exchange is often belittled
and infidelity is more profound

Crime has become an acceptable form of business
loyalty and integrity was once the "rule of thumb"
but individualistic and selfishness
is what the world has become

many have collided and have decided
to no longer love one another
selfishness and pure hatred is the only way to describe it...

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cbilliard commented on Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

02-09-2010

I LIKE WHERE U GOING TO TRY AND TAKE THIS POEM..YEA GOTTA LET THE PEN DO ITS THING ON THIS ONE

oneloveALZ commented on Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

02-09-2010

I like this poem....I agree with this left n right its all you see ...nice flow in this one

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Ceasar’s Poems (29)

Title Comments
Title Comments
B.O.L.O.(Be On THe Look-Out) 12-7-07 1
I Will (written 3-18-08) 5
Father to Son (12-17-07) 4
The Fantasy of Democracy(wri
tten 4-3-08)
1
Unaccomplishe
d Mission
2
Let Me Take You There 4
He-Motions(12
-6-05)
2
The Love We Have 0
Bad Boys For Life 1
LET US MARCH ON (this poem is not yet complete) 0
Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete) 2
True Survival 1
The Love of My Life 6
Together Forever 1
My Christmas list 1
Peace In God You'll find 2
Untitled 0
It Is Your Choice 1
Loneliness 0
Modern-Day Vietnam 3
Love Me Unconditional
ly
1
It Is He Who Is Allowing This To Be 2
In My Eyes(written 5-12-05) 1
Envisioned -3
Don't Believe The Hype 1
A Root Out of Dry Ground (partI) 1
A Real King and Queen(A Real Man and Woman) 2
A Kiss Good-bye 4
A Foster-Parent 0