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    • MX
    • Fantasy Quest Peace and Tranquility

    Untitled

    Shall I love you
    with an intensity you have never known
    with a fire never recorded in any sonnet - any history
    with eyes impossible to see beyond you
    Should I allow the light dancing in your eyes
    to leap out and paint the entire horizon of my future?

    I will pierce through you then laser like but become
    rooted within, if you gather me
    I'll germinate - blossom throughout you
    the seed of me flowering in your fertility
    birthing a cornucopia of sensations
    tongue and lips warm and moist along the nape of your neck
    more warm wetness painting so many more places
    until dendrites ignite, where you were dark
    together, we'll burn like forth of July sparklers in childrens' hands who run
    fingertips setting one another off
    We are the first children made innocent; by combination
    of love and lust, the tumblers which unlock us

    I ask again - Shall I love You

    MX

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    SavVySam commented on Untitled

    09-13-2009

    You definitely ignite some dazzling imagery here! I found line 15-17 very creative! Good work!

    kdarcy commented on Untitled

    04-16-2009

    An interesting piece, some good word combinations, thanks for sharing

    MX

    06/05/2009

    Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. peace Milton

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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