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You told me, you love me

There's no way you can hear me

Coz you're a thousand miles away

I can't find a way

 

You leave for another soul

Can't bear it, so foul

You crashed my heart into pieces

Can be whole again with your kisses

 

Struck me with a knife

Coz the pain is just the same

Please take my whole life

My pride is full of shame

 

But, thanks for the pain

For the experiences I've gained

I'm smiling when I meet you

Now, I'm dying to forget you. 

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Phoenix9 commented on (untitled)

07-25-2009

very nice, a good read indeed, keep up th good writing, you have a way with words

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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