UNSPOKEN

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    UNSPOKEN

    PAIN INSIDE THAT I'VE HELD FOR YEARS SOMETIMES SURFACE AND EXPRESS THEMSELVES THROUGH TEARS.I CANT HIDE WHAT I FEEL INSIDE EVEN THOUGH IT CANT SHATTER MY PRIDE,ALL I SAY IS THAT IVE TRIED TO OVERCOME THIS.BUT IT HOLDS ON TO ME UNTIL I FEEL THIS NUMBNESS,THEN I SURRENDER AND SAY I CANT OVERCOME THIS BUT I KNOW I CAN.EVERYDAY I STRIDE TO BE A BETTER PERSON THAN THE DAY BEFORE THAT'S HOW I KNOW IM STRONG AND YES LIFE GOES ON AND SO WILL THE TEARS FROM MY UNSPOKEN FEARS........

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    Godsgang commented on UNSPOKEN

    06-10-2009

    I see your pain and as a poet you have potential, but presentation is a big part. I suggest you try and separate your lines for better effect

    myvoice25

    06/11/2009

    thanks for taking the time to read it.i will try that.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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