Unmeeting

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  • Happiness

    Unmeeting
    Refreshing is the hope of meeting while
    Anticipation grows through pictures yet
    Stalling behind these walls I've built
    Hating you entered such chaos
    And yet appreciating that you
    Did

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    kdarcy commented on Unmeeting

    11-29-2009

    Love it, short ... the title intriguing. Real and hopeful, be well, k
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    Nicko7 commented on Unmeeting

    02-20-2009

    This is a great verse could be the start of an epic magical use of words conjuring the imagery for the movie in my mind. again well written
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    orsonav commented on Unmeeting

    02-20-2009

    Your poem got straight to the thesis. I left the reader wanting more. Very good
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    jaoa commented on Unmeeting

    02-17-2009

    Your poem renews like a fresh glass of cool water soothes a hot summer's day. I can feel the anticipation you speak of in your words. In fact, I associated it to the expansive thrill of the New Relationship Energy we all experience at one time or another. I like your writing very much... thank you for sharing. Joe
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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