Unforgiven

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  • Lost Love

    Unforgiven

    As I walk along a beach full of shattered hopes and broken dreams, I now know life isn't what it seems.


    When I think of her, my stomach churns and stirs.


    Blue-eyed baby is gone now, and still i wonder how.


    Skin of silk and hair of gold, a sight that never gets old.


    Been searching too long and every right ways wrong.


    If I die today will you love me tomorrow?


    Where have you been for so long?


    Why have you gone?


    You left me in the open sea, and watched me bleed.


    dying of loneliness and no one to save me, no hopes, no dreams, not one ounce of glee.


    To lay beside her is heaven and im unforgiven...

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    loanslanger commented on Unforgiven

    07-23-2009

    Deep poem my man. I liked it. Nothing like poems that come from the heart.

    Izual

    07/28/2009

    thank you. i really appreciate the feedback :)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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