Unedited Feelings

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    Unedited Feelings

    I hate you, I hate you
    The screams get louder
    She beats on his chest
    Hands clenched into fists

    Hold me my darling
    and don't let go
    Her voice coming from the park bench
    as people pass them by

    Please don't leave me
    I'm so scared
    She begs him
    as he's letting go of her hands

    I couldn't have do it without you
    she turns to thank
    her true best friend
    sitting proud and tall

    In the midst of it all,
    the tears and pain,
    She still loves and finds joy
    finally in the end she leaves in contentment



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    rita commented on Unedited Feelings

    01-12-2009

    your poem captures a\forgiving heart, which is good

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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