Undermined Elimination

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    Undermined Elimination

    Flawed to begin with.
    Execute the first stage of resurrection.
    The presentation of scalded pulp, pasted on with adhesive to the deluded.
    Potency declines in the abrupt dash to make the conversion.
    Misfortune evades into the defiance of disposition.

    Directing fragments of the descending, following.
    As if the sheep don't have enough herders by now,
    An alternative comes along to disrupt the stability.

    Substitute imaginary remedies for placebos,
    To get an immediate repair of plights not explained.
    Commanding to revive the subtle breathes,
    Claiming earlier to have alleviated the ails.

    A conflagration begins to infuse the veiled skies
    Faintly lustrous in the internal intervention
    Beseeching for a fixation to maintain
    The final level of an inclination.

    When all is composed yet again,
    The bleak vapors begin to structure into the shape of a shore.
    How hollow desires are for, but the deceived, it's doubtful
    Debris cascades gracefully when it rains.

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    Phoenix9 commented on Undermined Elimination

    05-10-2009

    Fantastic, love the word and form, they way it flows, a fav for me. 10 plus

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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