Try Me

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    Try Me

    New things in my life seem to move so fast
    I wonder sometimes are things meant to last
    I know that for everyone theirs someone else
    But the someone else i want is all to their self
    I know that it aint easy trying to start new love
    And its hard sometimes seeing who's really that special one
    Thats why all i need a chance to prove my love for you
    To show you all i feel and everything im willing to do
    So please think this over and reconsider how you feel
    Because with me ill leave no regrets on the way I make you feel.

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    concience commented on Try Me

    02-22-2009

    dam- i got chills reading dat one. i guess there are more good girls out there. i hope who ever you are searching for finds you. again, nice poem.

    SplashDream88 commented on Try Me

    02-15-2009

    This is a good poem although I don't understand it for my age.I now what you mean a little though.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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