Transcending

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  • Life

    Transcending

    To close my eyes and listen

    Is a skill so badly needed

    The art of just being

    Defines and questions seeing

    Letting what really is

    Just do its thing

    Like the ocean winds

    Or the cries from a baby

     

    I am able to relax

    Through my own form

    Of meditation and insight

    By the pure existence

    Of a loud quietness

    Uplifting more easily

    To prove myself to

    The wonders present

     

    Unnatural anxiety

    Is released in the breeze

    That cools the skin

    And allows me to breath

    In the tranquility of life

    Keeping me close and safe

    Cause I fear to be like

    Other s of my environment

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    Anne commented on Transcending

    08-09-2010

    I felt very relaxed and felt very at ease, great work! Keep it up.

    ansari commented on Transcending

    07-11-2010

    great soothing words to relax your mind , spirit and body. thank you. a 10 from me.

    Beautiful1974 commented on Transcending

    07-06-2010

    So you are good. lol. I really liked your poem. I wish I had more time to write. I have so much in my head...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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