torn to pieces

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    torn to pieces

    When you give all you've got..... Why do you get so little in return? When you give your heart.... why does it give them a free pass to make it burn? Love is a fantasy, but it can be a reality... but no more do i want it crowding me. You may think you learn the boy's mind, but actually you never do, they'll chew you up and spit you out before you know it.... depends on the kind you pursue. I wanna love, but i don't.... I xan, but i won't. I've been through the fire and its not fun, especially when you're battling with your inner self, and the battle you haven't won.

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    Plot121 commented on torn to pieces

    01-23-2009

    you carried out your message quite well you may need to work on some structure issues and widen you vocabulary but assume me your on your way to having so good work comming out keep plugging along. Robert..

    writerspassion commented on torn to pieces

    01-23-2009

    I felt this poem, its something we all have had to deal with at some point in our lives

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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