Too Far Away

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    Too Far Away

    I met you
    You met me
    I like you
    You like me
    But we are far away
    Too far away
    I live here
    You live there
    I want to see you
    You want to see me
    We want to meet
    Somewhere imbetween
    But you are there
    And i am here
    We will never meet
    And that makes me cry
    Because you are perfect for me
    I wish i knew you
    And you knew me
    But we are too far
    Too far away.

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    jessicanichole8 commented on Too Far Away

    11-04-2010

    i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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