Tomorrow

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    Tomorrow

     I think about yesterday and I see what I could have done, But it's to late.
    So I try to change today for today is to late,For you can not fix what happened yesterday for which is lost forever. So I think about tomorrow but tomorrow is not here yet.For you do not know what to expect for tomorrow.
    So I take one day at a time,To say I Love You...

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    SuSpence commented on Tomorrow

    05-03-2010

    I love it, 'Tomorrow Never Knows' Haha shades of John Lennon here. Big points with me :) -Spence
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    cresty

    05/03/2010

    big time suspence snap

    PRober commented on Tomorrow

    07-03-2009

    short, sweet and true words... well stated, keep writing!
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    bforibus commented on Tomorrow

    06-16-2009

    that's hot. i usual take poems like this and want there to be a melody because the subject is common, but somehow you have put an original feel to it. the desperation of time slipping away and the beauty of wanting the time to last longer for one simple reason.. great job.
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    cresty

    06/16/2009

    thank you bforibus

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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