Today's personification.....

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  • Allegory
    • nature
    • is adjacent to the sun and moon.....can life get any more creative

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    My intimate encounters with the mind of the day's

    Today's personification.....

     Today, shows me more of the same things
    the best of guides I’m sure knows everything
    so why present me with rude consistency?
    Are you within a mixed mood, bright but gloomy?
    I ask because I appreciate you each vision
    your natural essence and weathered spirit a blessing.
    A plethora of company, the good and the bad
    it is sad to see hate in eyes that share smiles
    pedophiles, thieves, liars, conspiracies
    Today shows me this, Gemini’s to the pleasantries
    Integrity, teachers, world peace, a future
    all creative arts are the key to an answer.
    Today, your being is filled with knowledge
    you have other names yesterday and tomorrow
    we walk in open breaths, in tuned to the death
    I now understand the heart beneath my crest
    when you manifest and present a contest
    through us so God blessed Today's a new quest.

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    DeepEclipse commented on Today's personification.....

    11-11-2009

    Its like the ground has no time to sink someone who keeps their head in the stars, beautiful they are. The quicksand pulls only at those planted, it is like this poem is pushing one to flight. To see there is more than one's own reflection. So much more. Absorb it while it can be absorbed, well written nature
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    koolmom0 commented on Today's personification.....

    11-07-2009

    This is a wonderful piece of work nature. It's cool how you made it sound like you were actually having a conversation with that particular day. Koolmom
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    bluewolf commented on Today's personification.....

    11-05-2009

    Each day is an interlude to a new beginning. We reach our destination one day at a time; not in one motion or leap. Well done.
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    1990lh commented on Today's personification.....

    10-30-2009

    wonderful nature i love reading people thoughts about life, and seeing things from their perspective. wonderful write
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    Rygar commented on Today's personification.....

    10-30-2009

    consistency rude and commonplace, to visit ones mind, emotions replaced, duality it seems the true form consumed, per chance to rest in the maddening gloom, in the disturbing comfort one ones rooms.
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    Rygar

    10/30/2009

    *ones own rooms

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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