to plain for Jane

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    to plain for Jane

    Look at me inside and out
    Am I the girl filled with doubt
    Lack of respect mostly regret
    The time we shared I can't forget
    Since I was born when I grew up
    Now your hurting me now watsup
    Your my father and Im your daughter
    Now you wanna talk but dont bother
    Help me God save me now
    I cant live with the pain and ppl found out
    The melestation is under ground
    Now im dead six feet deep
    Anger and pain ppl seek
    Death to you father comes fast
    For how you hurt me in the past

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    whitewings commented on to plain for Jane

    11-21-2008

    Nice that you let it out. cuase holding it in only hurts more.To pretty for doubt. Know that the one that made you can only break you. You have so much to do here.

    PoeticMind commented on to plain for Jane

    11-18-2008

    wow... thats was just tooo deep and sad....

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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