To go or not to go

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    To go or not to go
    Relationships always start off genuine, no middle man no boundaries
    Going out for a night on the town can be so special, romantic, and kind
    I began to think this was all for show, I've began to think that you no longer know
    Know who I am and what I stand for, Caring about yourself, caring less for anyone else
    It's a big deal when things turn sour, instead of counting mintues he's counting hours
    Hours before I contemplate on leaving , not looking back on what was once there
    At first you cared and now I don't care, so don't beg and plead for what could have been prevented
    You had your change throughout the years to pay attention
    Now your attention span has gotten longer, you see what's in front of you I suppose
    This has always been in front of you, but now you know
    My mind wonders constantly, and thinking to go or not to go?

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    Ceasar commented on To go or not to go

    11-04-2009

    I like this-sad, but it's true-how some people don't notice a good thing til it's gone. They think that they can have better with someone else, not knowing that what they had-you-were their best.
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    cmlestrade commented on To go or not to go

    07-25-2009

    I like the way you put this. In the beginning the love is true but a shrink I once worked for says eventually the love fades and is replaced by need. Once the greed of our need is satisfied we are ready to love again and by then it may be to late. Hope the love has come back or you may be going. Good thoughtful treatment of a familiar topic.
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    Lazarus commented on To go or not to go

    01-24-2009

    sorry,here is a rate, Laz"
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    Lazarus commented on To go or not to go

    01-24-2009

    Hey there,its Laz,and about your poem,I think that its all a matter of,"intention",before,the stark nakedness of truth in a real loving relationship. Yes,I found your commentary,to be dead on,with the "narcisists",the overly self-absorbed.
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    drewking commented on To go or not to go

    01-14-2009

    like what ur saying, this happens much to often... good work..
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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