Time will Tell...

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    I wrote this poem in a very dark but awakening time. I had alot to think about back then and it tells in my poetry I wrote...

    Time will Tell...

    The loss of a persons soul
    trapped in the essesence of time.
    Brings the presence of long earthly hours,
    and the night that passes by.
    The Darkness that surrounds me
    is all that I can see.
    I wait for the Light
    and a presence of mind
    to come and comfort me
    To guide me through the changes
    In the path I chose for myself.
     Before old age and Death put
    the memories of my life away
    on a shelf
    To be but a memory
    something from long ago.
    Not remembered as the living
    but merely as shadow.
    Of what once was
    but can no longer be
    Time will Tell
    What will become of me

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    raziel69 commented on Time will Tell...

    06-18-2009

    i love this, it takes me back to that same time when i felt soulless and nothing mattered. i love your wording, great work.

    sundanceatnight

    06/19/2009

    Thank you, Your poetry is at times like it was me writing it,,,,,

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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