T...I...E...D

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    T...I...E...D

    He was meant for you,
    You were meant for him,
    nothing should come between.
    You were carved out,
    he was selected,
    no one should give you the thrill!
    She is your back bone,
    he is your fore head,
    not even lack should divide.
    Some times you're up and sometimes he's down,
    learn to keep your heads cool and calm.
    When your clouds are filled with rain,
    learn the sharing game.
    KEEP your gaze straight
    for the knot is T..I..E..D.
    Keep your fingers crossed
    for the knot is T.I.E.D.
    the blessing of a child is a gift from God,
    but never let it be the essence of the cord.
    " Pick it up from where i stop
    dont let your curtains drop!
    and remember,
    THE KNOT IS T.I.E.D!

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    CatsMeow commented on T...I...E...D

    06-07-2009

    I love your poem, It certainly has style of artistic expressions. T.I.E.D as they are connected probably by marriage?. Good job! May I suggest that you consider explaining the use your acronym and initialism. (alphabetize words; i.e.). T.I.E.D, either in the poem or the title of the poem. For example Together In Eternal Dialog [Delight-Devotions) etc

    Sempersperans commented on T...I...E...D

    06-07-2009

    A powerful piece or writing , but I thought T.I.E.D. would be an acronym whose meaning would be revealed verse by verse e.g" T ..tightly bound by cords of need " ; maybe that's just me as a man looking for a gradual revelation of meaning ?

    Chrisjan commented on T...I...E...D

    05-27-2009

    I really like your style of writting. Its from your heart, which is hard to find today. These two poems I just read are good enough, for an award, I think. Thank you for sharing. Keep sharing your heart felt words they flow, as detailed stories, indeed !

    MizBlaze commented on T...I...E...D

    11-23-2008

    Good poem. I enjoyed that.

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