Thoughts

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    Thoughts

    I don't know were these thoughts of you are coming from every time i sit in one spot you cross my mind i be thinking to myselflike what are you doing this man not ready for you or maybe I'm not ready for him... he speak with words so clear and full of meaning that i just want to hear him talk cause i know what's he's about to say got some type of meaning to it he is so wise beyond his years the things he think about just amazing my mind he might be thinking I'm not listen to what he is saying but i am i hear every word of it i feel he think im speechless cause i have very little to say but really im just listening to him my heart and my mind be going head up my heart be tellin me to go with the flow and see were this can go don't tri to move to fast you might scare him away my mind be like to better tell him how you feel be for he gives you a title that you might not like I'm thinking like was he just trin to bust a nut or is he trin to build with me I'm scared to ask him cause i don't want to seem so open but i cant help but to think of you i don't know what i want to do with this I'm still in a battle with my heart and mind  we can make foundation to build something great i don't care we he has cause I'm tri to own what he got and that's his heart i hope he's wheeling to share with me

                                          STAY TUNE FOR PART ii

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    phatdaddee commented on Thoughts

    03-08-2010

    Excellent poem! The only question you have to answer here is: What are you willing to settle for? Because that is all that matters. If you want his heart then that is what you deserve. If he is not willing to give it then move on. Be friends w/o benifits and find someone willing to give you everything unless LESS is good enough then I say : Just sit back and go where ever he takes you.Good job on the poem, it evoked thoughts and that is what it is all about!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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