Thought

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  • Sadness
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  • Death
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  • Passion
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  • Confusion

    Thought

     I lied
    I cried
    I coughed
    I laughed
    Just Confused
    Just sad
    Just bemused
    Just mad

    Ah! What a great leader!

    He creates wars
    Well, ... security...
    For our sake
    Followers heads on the floor
    Their bodies separated

    Ah! What a great leader!

    He creates a rainbow
    Followers sleep into eternity
    For no just reason

    I now lie to cry
    I now cough to laugh
    Just confused
    Just sad

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    everafter commented on Thought

    07-05-2009

    a classic piece of the inner you, thoroughly enjoyed by all who read it, superb verse, easy to understand
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    JVB commented on Thought

    07-05-2009

    Simple yet powerful - I like it! I think using short and quick lines really helps illustrate the confusion and urgency.
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    LTSavoy commented on Thought

    06-29-2009

    Very moving and even here i can identify with it..
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    LTSavoy

    06/29/2009

    different place, I see the rein different face, who makes the pain different case, but still the same no difference, a waste, a shame

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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