THIS DRAGON

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    EVERYONE HAS A DRAGON INSIDE OF THEM. IF YOU DONT THINK YOU HAVE ONE, GIVE IT TIME, SHE OR HE WOULD SHOW THIER FACE SOONER OR LATER

    THIS DRAGON

     

    As humble as i try to be,sometimes the dragon inside of me screams to be free.Many people may take my humbleness and kindness for a weakness that is"nt weak at all.If they knew about this dragon,thier throat would swell up of fear, and thier ansestors would dig themselves out the ground to warn them about this oncoming dragon.Once upon a time this dragon took ahold of me.My soul seperated from my body,and i witness things i would normally not do.I saw my heart turn darker than a never ending well,my eyes showed no emotion,and my body conflicted endless pain on who ever was near me.For about a month now ive had this dragon under control,and with this new control over him i feel like a new human being.I cannot promise this dragon would stay caged because if this dragon should ever appear again i can only promise pain,misery,uncertanty,or maybe even death.

     


     

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    Teardrops commented on THIS DRAGON

    09-30-2010

    I agree we all have dragons in us and i hope yours you can control love the poem and the way it was written thanks for the read Marie

    dreadheadlion

    10/02/2010

    wow. thank you for taking time to read it marie. your comment means a great deal thank you

    Rygar commented on THIS DRAGON

    09-30-2010

    Not so much a poem as a short narrative but I enjoyed it. A few minor spelling issues , other than that I thought it was good. :-)

    dreadheadlion

    02/11/2014

    Sorry I wrote this when I just joined original poetry years ago. Ive just logged back in and saw your comment. I was thinking about fixing my horrible punctuation and spelling issues, but I think it gives it a little character. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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