This Ain't A Life It's A Goshdarn Arms Race

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    This Ain't A Life It's A Goshdarn Arms Race

    Tripping up and fumbling for the rope,
    Can't hold on much longer.
    Jaded and weary, I don't even care,
    This is not how I want to live my life.

    I release my grip and settle to the ground,
    Breathing hard, but happier still.
    Why hold onto a world you can't pace?
    I am now happy, I am now pleased.
    Gone with the rope are my ties to the world.

    Dare I regrip for another try?
    The question still remains: to what end?
    I see some like me, left behind,
    While others drift upward,
    Ever fighting against the succumbing peace.

    Is life better lived fighting to the top,
    Or lived in the peace of rest?
    I know my answer will never be resolved,
    Even unto death, when it will matter not at all.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on This Ain't A Life It's A Goshdarn Arms Race

    04-24-2009

    good poem. it could use some fixing but i'd say yeah you could be very good at poetry. u have a voice and a need to use so use it the best u can. don't be afraid to let a poem sit for a day or two then go back and tweak it.

    GTheRushSP

    06/11/2009

    thanks for the critique. i really appreciate it. i'll take your advice and review poems after writing them. thanks!

    GTheRushSP

    06/11/2009

    thanks for the critique. i really appreciate it. i'll take your advice and review poems after writing them. thanks!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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