Thinking of You

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    Thinking of You
    In the early morning hours,
    When the world is still;
    I think of you
    In my dreams...

    How I wish my love
    Could shorten the miles...
    Memories linger here
    With me.

    Every dream has an ending,
    But now you are gone...
    How can I fill this gap
    In my dreams.

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    daniel081180 commented on Thinking of You

    07-01-2009

    this is a very good poem. Short yet to the point . Great job. Hope to read a lot more from you.
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    free2poet

    07/13/2009

    Thanks for your positive comments.

    optimistic commented on Thinking of You

    06-08-2009

    Great I wish there was more said it seem like you wanted to write more to this piece yet never had a chance is it possible your dream ended to soon the love you mourn for you wanted to say more about. Great poem
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    free2poet

    06/08/2009

    It was written at a time of hurt. I was afraid, and moving on with my life.

    Kukia commented on Thinking of You

    06-06-2009

    A longing for a love gone.I felt this one.aWWsome!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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    free2poet

    06/06/2009

    Thanks. You got it.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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