THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

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    THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

     i know i made my faults
    i know i made it worst
    i know i hurt ur soul
    but baby sometimes i hurts...
    i know we fuss and fight
    yet sometimes we get along
    U heard me yesterday singing one of my songs...
    sometimes it brings me in my convert zone
    i got to get it down on paper cause its feeding my soul..
    things could get a lil better , yes boy i know
    but everytime i try to get us on track
    u leave me way behind... u like it like that
    u wanna see me low....
    u wanna see me down...
    but when im ready to go ...
    u wanna keep me around...
    things could get a lil better, yes boy i know

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    EyesOfRain commented on THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

    08-28-2012

    u wanna see me low.... "u wanna see me down... but when im ready to go ... u wanna keep me around... things could get a lil better, yes boy i know" Wow that's a shoe that fits my life and I wear it! Love this!!!!!
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    Chaos128 commented on THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

    10-04-2010

    First step to correcting a problem is identifying it. You're on the right track. Good work.
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    fmrdancer commented on THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

    10-16-2009

    I feel a lot of confusion in this piece. It's beautifully written and concieved. Well done .
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    koolmom0 commented on THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER

    10-16-2009

    Been there honey, you told the story well. Awesome. Love Koolmom
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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