The world of winds

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    The world of winds

    The world of winds




    The world of winds starts at birth.
    As the wind blow you age and grow.
    As you grow you began to see and
    Learn different things.

    Sometimes the world of winds comes
    With trouble and stones alone the way.
    It may seem hard to uncover as the frustration
    Of the wind blows harder as you grow.

    Sometimes it may look like you’re not going
    To be able to make it through but you don't
    Give up just because it's hard, you fight the
    Winds as it come. You cover up!

    Get your hat and gloves, scarf, coat and take
    God in your heart and soul to go out to face
    The world of winds. But somehow your faith
    Help you master the world of winds. And you
    Make it through all by yourself.

    By Thala Griffin
    Copy written with best poetry.


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    Paint1954 commented on The world of winds

    10-20-2009

    Absolutely a great poem. It says a whole lot about life.

    FoF commented on The world of winds

    03-07-2009

    Above comment is right on the money. It is a difficult read because there is no rhythm. Your message gets interrupted by a lack of flow but the message is clear. With some fine tuning, could be a nice piece of work.

    Scorpius commented on The world of winds

    03-03-2009

    'lo I gave this poem a six only because I had difficulty finding the rhythm for it(not to be mistaken with rhyme scheme) Great message just a bit hard to follow to decisive end points in thought at times. still a great message though.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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