The Window

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  • Emotional
    • Deacon5
    • Better then some,Worse then others!

    Poem Commentary

    Always be aware of the monsters inside yourself!

    The Window

                Standing looking,I see anger
         I see fear,danger!
                 
                Step back to get away,yet all
          follows.

                 The fear grows and the danger 
          becomes intence.

          I strick out in defence only to 
                feel pain.
          
          Shake my head in disbelief.

          Only to open my eyes,and realize that
                it is not a window,but...
       
          I am in a maze of MIRROR's

          I now know the anger and danger are
                in me.

              And I am more Afraid!!!!!!
              


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    mdpoetgirl commented on The Window

    08-02-2016

    Love that this piece is thought provoking and has an ironic ending. Well done!
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    jademelissa74 commented on The Window

    11-02-2009

    The content of this piece is very powerful. You capture the emotions well and deliver a thought-provoking message. There is always things to reflect upon and you are absolutely right when you say "Only to open my eyes,and realize that it is not a window" Many of us walk in denial. Your poem inflicts self-check in many ways. Great message. I have enjoyed the session :)) God bless.
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    icu2 commented on The Window

    10-20-2009

    Sometimes the monster within can be far more threatening to us because we know that if we loose control, the only one to blame will be ourselves! Very good, and thought provoking!
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    Deacon5

    10/22/2009

    Thank you for commentreally like you book

    aliciagall commented on The Window

    10-14-2009

    WOW I like, but you have to check your spelling. I don't think it was deliberate, was it? The ending is dramatic because you assume you are going to say that you are not afraid. Edit for spelling. It makes a difference. Post some more.
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    Deacon5

    10/14/2009

    Thank you Sista'means alot coming from someone,with words like yours.I'll check spelling from now on my fault,sorry

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