The Way Out

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with the hopes for a world without barriers....

The Way Out

The mighty flames of realities engulf,

The dense daze woven by reveries;

But there up rise a question, where-

The vivid but ambiguous way leads to?

 

The theories are extirpated,

The values are deracinated,

The limits are left far behind,

The impetus goes rigorous ahead…

 

Serene Thoughts are obsolete,

Buried deep inside, without a go…

Humanity get measured for each,

Even charity succumb profit motive…

 

The smiling faces conceal,

The very intensions of being fraud…

The high-tech culture penetrates,

The poor man’s soul & shatter the dreams…

 

Know that there is no way out,

Other than being ourselves always…

Still I wish for a ray of hope,

Bringing light to life, for all alike…

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Tempestlady commented on The Way Out

07-14-2009

Oppression, would have been a ood nm for this one. It's just another kind of slavery. I feel it too. There ar plenty of poets wriing about it. Don't lose hope, the older generation wanes, yunger cme into power. In time all things change. Good write, great message, form? well, maybe could use som polish. Liked it though.

Nadia1986 commented on The Way Out

07-07-2009

Nice you seem to be talking about finding hope for yourself and for others.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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