The Virgin Snow !

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    The Virgin Snow !


    The Virgin Snow


    If you’ve never donned the skis
    then you may never know
    just how explosive it can be
    to ride the virgin snow
    she lays herself before you
    inhibitions - don’t exist
    knowing once you’ve taken her
    you’ll savour - what you missed
    she’s pure, untouched, unguarded
    yearning now - she aches
    she beckons you with beauty
    while the breath - from you - she takes
    your adrenaline starts flowing
    as her enigma draws you near
    your want to taint perfection
    becomes greater than your fear
    it’s then the moment happens
    when you can wait - no more
    so you thrust yourself upon her
    and you ride - like never before
    she wraps herself around you
    as your body starts to glide
    fulfilled you’ll be with every move
    completely - satisfied
    touching you - you feel her
    so tender - her stroke on her face
    she gives a kind of freedom
    you’ll find - no other place
    short lived for you it’s over
    just a memory - to please
    for her it’s quite emotionless
    as soon again - she’ll freeze
    so - beware the virgin mountain
    as although - in appearance - she’s pure
    thousands have come before you
    and thousands will come - once more !!


    By Heaven

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    kdarcy commented on The Virgin Snow !

    04-11-2009

    A little wordy, a slower read than most ... but I liked it very much. Thanks for sharing. You got the snow covered, try one of cleansing rain with an erotic twist.

    Vincent commented on The Virgin Snow !

    11-17-2008

    The poem started out strong, you had my attention, but towards the end , I got confused. I read it 5 times and was still confused.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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