THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

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Thinking through about the significance and the awesomeness of the great relationship we keep with our selves in this world. In my wonder land,I just found out that KNOW ONE IS MORE IMPORTANT.

Like I said in my poem,if we had a choice of removing YOU,YOU AND YOU there will be no world.Simply put, the existence of this world it's all about THE SIGNIFICANT YOU.

THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

The world filled with many people,yet its incomplete.
Without the presence of this man,the world won't go round.
Without the voice of this man,the project can't be done.
Without the action of this man,the work won't go on.

Not because he is the richest,
Not because he is the most intelligent ,
Nor because he is the most important,
But because it's a group work.

Without a part of a body,
A function is left unfulfilled so the body is deficient.
The body might be seen to be complete,
Without the tongue, it cant speak.


Without the presence of this man,total gloominess
With his absence, absolute boredom.
DO YOU KNOW WHO THIS PERSON IS?
                    YOU!!!

Without You, You and You,this world won't exist.
Imagine if we had a choice of removing YOU,YOU AND YOU,
in this world,we would be left with nobody,
Obviously left with no world at all.

Guess what?You are Significant.
Your love,smiles,charisma, goodwill can’t be overemphasized

Your Wisdom, knowledge, intellectual capacities
All makes the beauty of OUR WORLD.

The awesomeness of your different parts,
Soprano,alto,tenor and bass are all varieties
that spice our world.
The existence of this world is  about THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

Though we are many,we are one body
Keep being the best YOU,keep being God's best,
The sky is our stepping stone,
Gods glory,His totalty will see us through

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Strider commented on THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

09-30-2010

A very heartfelt and inspirational write! It think this is something you have had to think about for a long time. Good write. Nice approach to the subject. Keep it up.

knight4696 commented on THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

01-07-2010

A very heartfelt and inspirational write! Very nice work. Keep it up! :

Mrpoetry87 commented on THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

01-05-2010

I really like the way you expressed your feelings in this poem. It was a beautiful read, very warming and heart felt. I like the way you layed it out, it has a very nice clear structure. You're very good....

kittman101 commented on THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

07-23-2009

this is truly inspiring and it is truly awesome. keep up the good work

dario7 commented on THE SIGNIFICANT YOU

07-17-2009

if i must say, good one lol! keep the fire burning girl, i surely do know that black is always ahead in everything. nice one. our world need to be one for the survival of all. dario.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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